I am a Year 8 student at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland New Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my Teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Hi Claudia your explanation writing is great but maybe you could re-read your writing to see if it make sense but other than keep up the great work Lini :)
Hi Claudia, this a great piece of a explanation writing, you have explained everything well and i agree with you,but next time, yo should re-read your writing before you post it. Good work!! Kaliamata
Hi Claudia, I really liked both of your reasons, I thought they were very relevant to the subject. I also have to agree with you, I also think it should be changed to 9:30. The only thing that needs attention is your conclusion because you don’t have one.
Hi Claudia your explanation writing is great but maybe you could re-read your writing to see if it make sense but other than keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteLini :)
Hi Claudia, this a great piece of a explanation writing, you have explained everything well and i agree with you,but next time, yo should re-read your writing before you post it. Good work!! Kaliamata
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked both of your reasons, I thought they were very relevant to the subject. I also have to agree with you, I also think it should be changed to 9:30. The only thing that needs attention is your conclusion because you don’t have one.
Good Job!
Aaliyah