Bio Poem
Claudia
I am Funny ,Annoying, Wired ,
I am a granddaughter of Nanivi and Luseane Sili,
A daughter of Pililolo sili
A daughter of Pililolo sili
Nice, Kind,Talkative
Experienced going to Aussie for the first time and turning 12
My fears are Cutting my hair, Heights,
My Wishes is to have a baby brother in the future
What i have achieved is having my class on the news
I was born at Auckland Hospital New Zealand,
And live at 66b chlenbrun Christian Mangere East.
And live at 66b chlenbrun Christian Mangere East.
Sili
WALT :
To describe myself using the structure of a bio poem.
Hi Claudia,
ReplyDeleteI really love the effort you put into this poem. Just a quick reminder, think about where your capitals go. But overall, this is a really lovely poem.
Hi Claudia, this is a very appealing self, realisation. I think that this poem tells me more about yourself then a piece of writing. Keep up the good writing👍🏽
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good Bio Poem about you. I really like your fears it is very good, it is good to cut your very long hair because you hair blows all over my face.
Keep up the great work.
Helena:)